Quiet, yet not dark
A feeling of complete joy
This can't be the end.
Xxx
This is my first attempt at a haiku; a Japanese three line, 17 syllable poem in the form:
5
7
5
It's linked at haiku heights for the prompt "death".
Quiet, yet not dark
A feeling of complete joy
This can't be the end.
Xxx
This is my first attempt at a haiku; a Japanese three line, 17 syllable poem in the form:
5
7
5
It's linked at haiku heights for the prompt "death".
A nice beginning. They're addictive.
ReplyDeleteI fear so, thanks Anthony
DeleteExcellent haiku!
ReplyDeletethat means a lot coming from you mama, thanks
Deletegreat haiku...aren't they a fun challenge? you're off to a wonderful start/..
ReplyDeletereally really fun and I fear addictive, thanks Joanne
Deletegreat first attempt, are you sure you've not been practising.
ReplyDeleteI promise :)
DeleteI like the way it's the opposite of what death could make you think, well done
ReplyDeletethanks, I'm always looking to turn peoples fears.on their head
DeleteWatta way to go! (and with a first haiku too)
ReplyDeletethanks Judith
Deletewow x pretty impressive for a first attempt! You have a talent there x
ReplyDeletelet's hope it wasn't luck
DeleteIndeed beautiful, a death I could hope for someday.
ReplyDeletethanks Susan, me too
DeleteYou did a lovely job. Keep it up! ;-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
I believe I left you a comment already... Hmm.
ReplyDeleteEliz
you did, thanks Eliz, they just wait for me to approve them (I was getting hundreds of spam each day). thanks so much for visiting
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