Silver petals
All the same
All perfect
Carefully arranged
No flaw, no claw
No damaged part
All symmetrical
Right from the start
Designed, created
To be strong
Made meticulously
Nothing went wrong
But something did
They missed the point
A flower is more
Than measured joints
Without the love
The breath of life
This flower is just
A metal knife
ooooo Emma- this is terrific! Love love the last 4 lines!
ReplyDeleteHave a great week!
I dig the rhyme and rhythm, Emma!
ReplyDeleteThanks for playing M.M.P.P.