I am constantly amazed by the range of expression that people can find in 17 syllables. Sometimes, even fewer, depending on the form of Haiku. I love this piece. Thank you, so much, for bringing it to Haiku Friday.
Welcome at Carpe Diem Emma. I am your host and I try to comment on every post I get, but rright now I am a bit behind on commenting. What a wonderfully composed haiku you have shared here with us. Very strong in it's choice of words ... that first line [...] skin feels every touch [...] I like very much.
Very expressive haiku ~ well penned ~
ReplyDeleteCarol of (A Creative Harbor)
I found that song haunting too! Nicely drawn haiku!
ReplyDeleteI am constantly amazed by the range of expression that people can find in 17 syllables. Sometimes, even fewer, depending on the form of Haiku. I love this piece. Thank you, so much, for bringing it to Haiku Friday.
ReplyDeletePainful touch on skin
ReplyDeleteBeaten there with switch or whip
Rhythm without love
JzB
A wonderful haiku. Love and pain creates it's on unique song.
ReplyDeleteNice, there's a story here.
ReplyDeleteWelcome at Carpe Diem Emma. I am your host and I try to comment on every post I get, but rright now I am a bit behind on commenting.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderfully composed haiku you have shared here with us. Very strong in it's choice of words ... that first line [...] skin feels every touch [...] I like very much.
Love this melting of feeling and sound!
ReplyDeletemusic not just delivered, but lived. Very nice thank you :)
ReplyDeleteHow many times can such music be delivered?
ReplyDeleteDrumming haiku
Very nice haiku. Hope you continue to link up with Carpe Diem. My own haiku have evolved so much.. :-)
ReplyDeleteDelightful haiku Emma and welcome! :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz