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Monday, 11 February 2013

Lost Stork

Missing: stork, white, tall
Expected to bring our baby
Never arrived

Please keep an eye out
Think it might have gone to heaven
Taken baby there


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13 comments:

  1. Mark11 February 2013 at 13:09

    Missing the stork is surely a great disappointment.

    Stork

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  2. carol l mckenna11 February 2013 at 15:17

    lovely haiku and play on words ~

    Carol of (A Creative Harbor) on blogger

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  3. Jazzbumpa11 February 2013 at 15:56

    Wistful
    Beautifully done
    But now I haz a sad

    JzB

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  4. joanne11 February 2013 at 15:57

    sad ... hope this is not personal....

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    1. LLM Calling12 February 2013 at 08:18

      it's very personal and I'm wishing I'd written this earlier so it could have gone in my book.of poetry about babyloss. http://Facebook.com/storysongbook

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  5. brudberg11 February 2013 at 20:17

    Sad set, but truth for many.

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  6. Chèvrefeuille12 February 2013 at 02:02

    Sad story in this haiku set, I hope it's not a personal story. It's true that a lot of parents never see the stork or missing it.

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  7. Eliz Frank13 February 2013 at 14:40

    Another terrific haiku touch Emma! :-)

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