We bask in the light
As we are raised upward
Grief we leave behind
We bask in the light
Removing all darkness
Embracing our soul
As we are raised upward
Our fears all fall away
Hope replaces all
Grief we leave behind
For those in darkness still
Engulfed in love
Your choice of form and diction complement one another so nicely. Great workl
ReplyDeleteI agree your composition is excellent and makes the poem that much more powerful. Beautifully done!
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