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Saturday, 2 November 2013

By the garden path #tanrenga

by the garden path
an upside down flowerpot
cottage for a toad

Stalked by a lively cat
Toy he hopes not to destroy

The second stanza (7-7) is a tan Renga response to Mark Redfearn's haiku; inspired by Tommy who turned once yesterday and can hunt but not kill (yet)!


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5 comments:

  1. carol l mckenna2 November 2013 at 15:27

    Sweet finish to Mark's haiku ~ love the cat photo ~ thanks, carol, xx

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  2. joanne2 November 2013 at 17:45

    I once had a cockatiel that removed all the buttons from my remote!

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  3. Sun3 November 2013 at 02:10

    so cute both your completion and your kitty. made me smile.

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  4. Chèvrefeuille3 November 2013 at 02:53

    Lovely completion Emma I like the humor in that second stanza.

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  5. Jess4 November 2013 at 15:47

    I really liked it! Gave me a chuckle but I could also see the scene.

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