tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post2243572486753405712..comments2024-01-02T10:13:02.894+00:00Comments on LLM Calling: I'm thankful for.... an alpha-girl.....LLM Callinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-12010420922880826322013-01-06T06:59:55.626+00:002013-01-06T06:59:55.626+00:00your first poem full of optimism... the second dev...your first poem full of optimism... the second devilishly fun!<br /><br />hoping the new year is off to a good start for you!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-41786271970913857802013-01-03T20:02:13.037+00:002013-01-03T20:02:13.037+00:00I love both poems..you have taken the list and ran...I love both poems..you have taken the list and ran with it. Kudos!<br /><br />"Through razor sharp times<br />Edges may be fraying<br />But despite the perfectionist<br />I won't be unspooling" Love this!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-60803424797266044792013-01-03T19:04:01.527+00:002013-01-03T19:04:01.527+00:00Using the words to catch two totally diferent feel...Using the words to catch two totally diferent feelings and set of emotions is what I especially like about these two gems. Truly great work from that list of words. Loved both of them (maybe the second a little more)Great job.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-65223248143216278172013-01-03T18:52:31.963+00:002013-01-03T18:52:31.963+00:00I enjoy the differing tones of each one here, Emma...I enjoy the differing tones of each one here, Emma!! Hope resounds in the first and a sassy empowerment in the second. Nicely done!! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-39499927908722999772013-01-03T05:52:35.465+00:002013-01-03T05:52:35.465+00:00Ha! I love these sections:
"It could be nast...Ha! I love these sections:<br /><br />"It could be nasty <br />It might be bitter<br />But one thing I know<br />It won't be a killer"<br /><br />"I'm an alpha-girl<br />Whatever that means<br />A girl of opposites<br />And in betweens"jasmine calyxhttp://jasminecalyx.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-86565282569688419032013-01-03T04:34:01.594+00:002013-01-03T04:34:01.594+00:00I enjoy reading your poetry ... this time around, ...I enjoy reading your poetry ... this time around, poem number two blew me away! Loved it.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-30545357059869192152013-01-03T02:20:14.786+00:002013-01-03T02:20:14.786+00:00Nice, Emma... I especially like:
So on into the n...Nice, Emma... I especially like:<br /><br />So on into the new year<br />I bravely embark<br />If I see clouds then I'll remember<br />They're surrounded by silvery marksLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-87375513939525247332013-01-03T00:20:29.476+00:002013-01-03T00:20:29.476+00:00I, too, really like what you did with the first po...I, too, really like what you did with the first poem. Way to write, using all the words!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-81577545887950482022013-01-02T23:19:33.260+00:002013-01-02T23:19:33.260+00:00Emma, I really liked the first poem especially.......Emma, I really liked the first poem especially.....and the way you were able to rhyme as you did. I enjoyed thinking about what it means to be an 'alpha girl.'Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-89770545314883467102013-01-02T22:22:53.660+00:002013-01-02T22:22:53.660+00:00thanks Kerrythanks KerryLLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-18031896014619709052013-01-02T22:22:38.591+00:002013-01-02T22:22:38.591+00:00sorry, I should have made it clearer, they are def...sorry, I should have made it clearer, they are definitely two poems.LLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-72415243715667961532013-01-02T21:38:51.952+00:002013-01-02T21:38:51.952+00:00The whole thing is wonderful, but the section betw...The whole thing is wonderful, but the section between the xxxx seems to make a powerful stand-alone poem.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-4873439414150212762013-01-02T21:14:38.445+00:002013-01-02T21:14:38.445+00:00I really like the way you made the words your own ...I really like the way you made the words your own in the first poem.<br /><br />The second reads like an anthem for alpha-women.<br /><br />Well done in writing two poems and using all the words.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com