tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post6142237162862432959..comments2024-01-02T10:13:02.894+00:00Comments on LLM Calling: Squirrel cinquainLLM Callinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-31547573511979843452013-02-05T04:18:30.306+00:002013-02-05T04:18:30.306+00:00Someone mentioned the syllable count of "squi...Someone mentioned the syllable count of "squirrel," and I got that... one of the things I HATE about forms. Me, I'm a "Squirl" person.<br /><br />Having disparaged the form, I did attempt it. But you know what I thought of when the squirrel was trying to get at your pockets? Gollum in Lord of the Rings, "It's the precious... and we wants it!" Wow, a fuse blew in my brain, huh? Thanks, this was great.<br /><br />Amy http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/02/04/cinquains-for-real-toads/Sharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-89039834745495916442013-02-03T20:06:54.052+00:002013-02-03T20:06:54.052+00:00Love the vined stump..It has a poem written all ov...Love the vined stump..It has a poem written all over it. You cinquain is delightfully clever and to take on the longer form...bravo!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-10208962402898666172013-02-03T17:45:30.235+00:002013-02-03T17:45:30.235+00:00YOU are clever! This was fun to read~
Great formYOU are clever! This was fun to read~<br />Great formEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-30865926274766400312013-02-03T15:03:43.966+00:002013-02-03T15:03:43.966+00:00squirrels... such posers:-)squirrels... such posers:-)Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-17099719767866695092013-02-03T12:06:15.904+00:002013-02-03T12:06:15.904+00:00funny, I thought he was following me :) funny, I thought he was following me :) LLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-4074267612987101302013-02-03T12:05:37.493+00:002013-02-03T12:05:37.493+00:00squirrels are easy to write about :)squirrels are easy to write about :)LLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-89463900784226081902013-02-03T12:05:13.723+00:002013-02-03T12:05:13.723+00:00me too, isn't it amazing, it was huge as well,...me too, isn't it amazing, it was huge as well, about 10 foot tall LLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-4172389416921218512013-02-03T12:04:22.306+00:002013-02-03T12:04:22.306+00:00thanks, I love the first stanza as well and was te...thanks, I love the first stanza as well and was tempted to leave it there but had too much else to say :)LLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-83920388013516029512013-02-03T12:03:31.990+00:002013-02-03T12:03:31.990+00:00thanks, it was a lot of fun to writethanks, it was a lot of fun to writeLLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-75740330731475760392013-02-03T12:03:10.179+00:002013-02-03T12:03:10.179+00:00thanks Susan thanks Susan LLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-17035114777354772022013-02-03T12:02:53.490+00:002013-02-03T12:02:53.490+00:00it was a lot of fun, I've never seen so many s...it was a lot of fun, I've never seen so many squirrels and all so tameLLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-5399045780091291632013-02-03T12:02:15.002+00:002013-02-03T12:02:15.002+00:00that sounds like some new forms for me to try, I l...that sounds like some new forms for me to try, I love order and rhythm, I'm off to try some LLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-15127248443011373292013-02-03T06:14:58.209+00:002013-02-03T06:14:58.209+00:00..felt like I was following him everywhere..nicely.....felt like I was following him everywhere..nicely done ;)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-61037068208792525212013-02-03T02:39:33.160+00:002013-02-03T02:39:33.160+00:00I had a difficult with ONE cinquain ... you did th...I had a difficult with ONE cinquain ... you did this and made it seem effortless.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-18070537995574084282013-02-03T01:45:06.265+00:002013-02-03T01:45:06.265+00:00Okay, I want that vine tangled stump! Impressed by...Okay, I want that vine tangled stump! Impressed by the flow of this. Katerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05645403612156172760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-38886849520432114982013-02-02T22:23:55.686+00:002013-02-02T22:23:55.686+00:00These capture the spirit of mischievous squirrels ...These capture the spirit of mischievous squirrels so well! Great job!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-55200757523471260682013-02-02T20:54:42.986+00:002013-02-02T20:54:42.986+00:00Your metre is superb, especially in the first five...Your metre is superb, especially in the first fiver.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-60210324294511543362013-02-02T20:03:00.625+00:002013-02-02T20:03:00.625+00:00Nicely done Emma! Really flows well and fun to re...Nicely done Emma! Really flows well and fun to read too :-)Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-25734344891984141602013-02-02T19:55:45.652+00:002013-02-02T19:55:45.652+00:00Clever! SO smooth that I nearly missed it was a g...Clever! SO smooth that I nearly missed it was a garland. Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-80754203344574966032013-02-02T19:46:48.812+00:002013-02-02T19:46:48.812+00:00Eeee it is so cute! I'm glad you had great tim...Eeee it is so cute! I'm glad you had great time taking squirrel pictures! :D GoddessChhavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13154853993554108461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-64154715864369006142013-02-02T19:12:59.608+00:002013-02-02T19:12:59.608+00:00oh! so fun, i love this! though i think the syllab...oh! so fun, i love this! though i think the syllable count for "squirrel" depends on where you live :)<br />i'm impressed that you took on the garland cinquain. i bet you're one of those people who likes to write things like villanelles and sestinas. (i'm not one of those people, heh.)Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.com