tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post6349155368770402617..comments2024-01-02T10:13:02.894+00:00Comments on LLM Calling: Curled up #NaPoWriMoDayFourteenLLM Callinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-44728803591174073162013-04-16T02:31:10.407+01:002013-04-16T02:31:10.407+01:00"My baby"...
NO sweeter words than that..."My baby"...<br /><br />NO sweeter words than that. Sigh.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-55412410734807347082013-04-15T18:20:01.502+01:002013-04-15T18:20:01.502+01:00A difficult form, you managed it beautifully!!!A difficult form, you managed it beautifully!!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-186495258467029392013-04-15T12:20:31.334+01:002013-04-15T12:20:31.334+01:00Lovely ending...Lovely ending...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-85087275595499519622013-04-15T01:38:06.240+01:002013-04-15T01:38:06.240+01:00Oh, this is gently and sweet :D
I agree like a lul...Oh, this is gently and sweet :D<br />I agree like a lullaby~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-51354306429561992502013-04-14T23:47:42.547+01:002013-04-14T23:47:42.547+01:00Perfect, Emma, as a newborn is perfect.
KPerfect, Emma, as a newborn is perfect.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-4235763030009277042013-04-14T22:04:43.271+01:002013-04-14T22:04:43.271+01:00Hope and caring in this poem, just like I see in t...Hope and caring in this poem, just like I see in the picture. Well done form poem.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-82206526114222587342013-04-14T21:36:21.056+01:002013-04-14T21:36:21.056+01:00Love the flow from end words into beginning words....Love the flow from end words into beginning words. Such a lovely lullaby.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-88376529002880623512013-04-14T18:20:02.235+01:002013-04-14T18:20:02.235+01:00I love this cascading form. You express a new Moth...I love this cascading form. You express a new Mother's fears so well,,,and the thoughts that come full circle,,back to the sweetness in her arms.Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-42101265076194808922013-04-14T18:06:47.941+01:002013-04-14T18:06:47.941+01:00"Fear not" has biblical echoes about it,..."Fear not" has biblical echoes about it, a phrase that appears over and over again when God confronts humans.<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2013/04/14/a-dozen-whirls-2/" rel="nofollow"><b>A Dozen Whirls</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-71492429432690641242013-04-14T17:25:35.050+01:002013-04-14T17:25:35.050+01:00I like the way this builds from the end line words...I like the way this builds from the end line words, almost like a cascade poem--and you capture the serenity mixed with uncertainty that is at the heart of mothering, as well as the contemplative mood of the picture. Thanks for participating.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-91145389422147200102013-04-14T17:13:16.198+01:002013-04-14T17:13:16.198+01:00This is as pure a lullaby as I have ever heard sin...This is as pure a lullaby as I have ever heard sing.<br />Perfect.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.com