tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post7691520720970016817..comments2024-01-02T10:13:02.894+00:00Comments on LLM Calling: Croc met snake #NaPoWriMoDayNineLLM Callinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-73611633668731309522013-04-10T15:01:41.235+01:002013-04-10T15:01:41.235+01:00I liked the second one, it reads like a wonderful ...I liked the second one, it reads like a wonderful poem for children.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-31270876179296915252013-04-10T02:35:11.790+01:002013-04-10T02:35:11.790+01:00Do you think making "realizing" "r...Do you think making "realizing" "realized" would make it flow better? Very cute and I like #2. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-77381065582874984462013-04-10T01:51:24.814+01:002013-04-10T01:51:24.814+01:00This is so fun! I love it!This is so fun! I love it!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-21629068551477344652013-04-10T01:44:12.989+01:002013-04-10T01:44:12.989+01:00I agree with Helen (and so, of course, with Mama Z...I agree with Helen (and so, of course, with Mama Zen) that the second is the best. It moves quickly, like a snake or a crocodile, thus has more 'bite' than version one. <br />But don't you just love poems that write themselves? Labor-saving devices for poets!<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-634459691510412802013-04-10T00:55:52.513+01:002013-04-10T00:55:52.513+01:00I like the first one. Thanks for the giggle, Emma!...I like the first one. Thanks for the giggle, Emma!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-84737738089279151062013-04-10T00:09:09.881+01:002013-04-10T00:09:09.881+01:00Oooh you're doing NaNoWriMo very brave!Oooh you're doing NaNoWriMo very brave!Actually Mummy...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06425476163374667083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622820281827881345.post-11850969570099382012013-04-09T23:01:35.176+01:002013-04-09T23:01:35.176+01:00Version two is my fave! Very cute! Version two is my fave! Very cute! Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.com