If you could have seen
Their faces you'd know how full
Of life they were
Life they were living
Exploring and learning
From whatever came
Whatever came was
An intriguing and wonderful
Opportunity
Opportunity
To learn and share with others
The wonders of life
Wonders of life like
Love and friendship and fun
Shared together
Shared together they
Were full of charisma and life
Perfection of youth
Oh how sweet!
ReplyDeletelovely....
ReplyDeleteSweet, innocent, bliss. Enjoyed the read.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Emma. This is tender.
ReplyDeleteThe picture was a nice tip for an application. It is sooo neat watching the little ones learn. They love learning the new!
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I love your thought and words which you express about the relation and amazing picture make these lines more wonderful. I bookmark you. charisma.co.uk
ReplyDeleteTender, sweet and charming.
ReplyDeleteTender, sweet and charming.
ReplyDeleteI love your Haiku chain and the picture of the little ones illustrating it so naturally :)
ReplyDeleteFine chain and celebration. Love the pic.
ReplyDeleteLove how each last line begins the next set. It really works - and what an adorable photo!
ReplyDeleteThe form and flow are so pleasing as you hook each stanza to the next with repeated phrases. Very effective devices, Emma.
ReplyDeleteSo sweet..uplifting. I like the repetition and the visual form.
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