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Tuesday, 2 April 2013

Near Miss #NaPoWriMoDayTwo

Warm and heady Spanish evening
Outside playing on the swings

Nothing very unusual
Until he grins "come follow me"

Chasing him around the corner
Heartbeat racing, so exciting

Lips meet barely, so unfairly
Less first kiss more near miss

Xxx

Linked up at real toads where we were challenged to write about a time from our past.  I reckon this memory comes from when I was about eight years old.

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9 comments:

  1. Janine Bollée2 April 2013 at 11:57

    Sweet.
    Lucky there was somebody there to your picture :-)

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  2. Lolamouse2 April 2013 at 12:32

    Such a sweet and poignant memory!

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  3. Sherry Blue Sky2 April 2013 at 16:13

    This is a cool glimpse of little-girl days.

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  4. Ellecee2 April 2013 at 16:29

    This is very sweet and innocent,,,,Love it,,,

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  5. Susie Clevenger2 April 2013 at 16:43

    So sweet...love the ending.

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  6. Kerry O'Connor2 April 2013 at 16:58

    This is a lovely memory to cherish.

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  7. Kay L. Davies2 April 2013 at 20:00

    A near-miss is good for 8 years old. LOL
    I remember when I was 12 or 13, and "romance" was having a boy ask if he could walk me home from public skating.
    There was a lot to be said for the good old days but, as Susie pointed out, it wasn't all great.
    K

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  8. Unknown2 April 2013 at 21:09

    Clever and sweet and endearing. Nicely done, Emma!

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  9. Helen2 April 2013 at 22:24

    Simply adorable ... bet we've all had an experience like yours.

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