Wasted
Used up
Discarded
Dumped
Unwanted
Abandoned
Toxicity contained
Dirt remained
Fresh air now provided
Healed
Regenerated
Corrected
Loved
Valued
Appreciated
Xxxx
Magpie Tales provided this picture for inspiration, the words kind of placed themselves.
This is excellent!
ReplyDeleteVery, very nice! I love the shape of your poem. It feels holistic ... very healing somehow.
ReplyDeleteHopeful and holistic, as Wabi Sabi said.
ReplyDeleteVery creative.
ReplyDeleteClever write - very creative.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Love the message in this! :-)
ReplyDeletenicely written and thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteI like the way you turned such a depressing image to such an uplifting poem!
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