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Monday 4 March 2013

Usurai

Temptingly shiny
Playground for sliding
Thin ice

Thin ice
I walk on every day
Hoping it holds

Hoping it holds
As I sculpt duck necks
Temptingly shiny

Xxxxx

Inspired by and linked up at carpe diem.

8 comments:

  1. how very lovely....I think we all tread lightly at times..

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  2. a delicate balance in the second...

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  3. The shiny things that tempt us may not always be safe...

    Thin Rind of Ice

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  4. I remember loving to crack the thin ice on all the puddles! So gratifying!

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  5. We just can't avoid that thin ice can we.

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  6. "Hoping it holds"

    Why do we put ourselves in danger?

    Thin Ice

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  7. Yes that first one is excellent wordplay. Very good

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  8. I like the way the end completes the beginning - very nice
    I'm sure the ducks are tempted to explore even if they slip

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