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Friday 17 May 2013

We found a birds egg

Birds egg
One careful owner
Half price

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Rachel doesn't appreciate this haiku.  Mike however days this is his sort of poem.   I wonder what haiku heights thinks.

7 comments:

  1. I hate when you get broken eggs! Great haiku =)

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  2. Better a broken egg than a broken heart...and
    a more original haiku !
    Peace
    Siggi

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  3. A broken eggshell always seems to generate touches of sadness! Lovely haiku!

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  4. To me an egg is a wonder. It's strong at the same time it's fragile! Nicely Emma!

    Hank

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  5. Never liked those sales and half price stuff!! Always something unsatisfactory!! Nice Haiku and applause!!

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  6. symbolising the fragility of life x very good haiku x

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