Bjorn Rudberg wrote this haiku and carpe diem challenged us to wrote a second stanza.
morning shimmer
dew frosting on furze
a single leaf falls
Here are my attempts at competing the Tan Renga:
morning shimmer
dew frosting on furze
a single leaf falls
Silently drifting downward
Caught on a young deers nose
Xxx
morning shimmer
dew frosting on furze
a single leaf falls
In the empty forest glade
No one hears, does it fall?
Xxx
morning shimmer
dew frosting on furze
a single leaf falls
Frozen forever; glass-like
Hits the ground hard; shatters, gone
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These are all gorgeous ... I am glad that you like this Tan Renga feast :-)
ReplyDeleteVery nice. I particularly like the one with the deer.
ReplyDeletei like all three! ☺
ReplyDeleteI love the one with the deer also, but they are all very well done!
ReplyDeleteMorning Shimmer