Saturday, 2 November 2013

By the garden path #tanrenga

by the garden path
an upside down flowerpot
cottage for a toad

Stalked by a lively cat
Toy he hopes not to destroy

The second stanza (7-7) is a tan Renga response to Mark Redfearn's haiku; inspired by Tommy who turned once yesterday and can hunt but not kill (yet)!


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5 comments:

Carol L McKenna said...

Sweet finish to Mark's haiku ~ love the cat photo ~ thanks, carol, xx

joanne said...

I once had a cockatiel that removed all the buttons from my remote!

Sun said...

so cute both your completion and your kitty. made me smile.

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Lovely completion Emma I like the humor in that second stanza.

Jess said...

I really liked it! Gave me a chuckle but I could also see the scene.