Friday, 1 November 2013

Scarecrow #tanrenga

The challenge is to write a 7-7 Tan Renga stanza response to the Haiku Stanza:

wind jostles the scarecrow
near the heavy-hung cornstalks
the summer is spent

Leaves swirl around soft straw legs
Dizzy, he falls on the ground



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6 comments:

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

That's what I'd call a splayed scarecrow! ;)

kaykuala said...

Fun and games may not be good in certain situations. How true Emma! Nicely!

Hank

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Very nicely completed Emma, it's an awesome second stanza in which the autumn-wind is hiding ... thank you for participating.

haikuplatespecial said...

Cool and sad.

Atreyee said...

Ah,poor chap!Must be tired after such a long hard summer!Loved the humour & the picture-well done:-)

joanne said...

He must have been at moondustwriter's dance!