Sunday, 3 November 2013

Frozen leaf #tanrenga

Bjorn Rudberg wrote this haiku and carpe diem challenged us to wrote a second stanza.

morning shimmer
dew frosting on furze
a single leaf falls

Here are my attempts at competing the Tan Renga:

morning shimmer
dew frosting on furze
a single leaf falls

Silently drifting downward
Caught on a young deers nose

Xxx

morning shimmer
dew frosting on furze
a single leaf falls

In the empty forest glade
No one hears, does it fall?

Xxx

morning shimmer
dew frosting on furze
a single leaf falls

Frozen forever; glass-like
Hits the ground hard; shatters, gone


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4 comments:

Kristjaan Panneman said...

These are all gorgeous ... I am glad that you like this Tan Renga feast :-)

haikuplatespecial said...

Very nice. I particularly like the one with the deer.

sun said...

i like all three! ☺

jrbhaiku said...

I love the one with the deer also, but they are all very well done!

Morning Shimmer