Friday, 17 May 2013

We found a birds egg

Birds egg
One careful owner
Half price


Rachel doesn't appreciate this haiku.  Mike however days this is his sort of poem.   I wonder what haiku heights thinks.


Anonymous said...

I hate when you get broken eggs! Great haiku =)

Siggi in Downeast Maine said...

Better a broken egg than a broken heart...and
a more original haiku !

Gemma Wiseman said...

A broken eggshell always seems to generate touches of sadness! Lovely haiku!

kaykuala said...

To me an egg is a wonder. It's strong at the same time it's fragile! Nicely Emma!


Nanka said...

Never liked those sales and half price stuff!! Always something unsatisfactory!! Nice Haiku and applause!!

Sara McNulty said...

I love this!

Anonymous said...

symbolising the fragility of life x very good haiku x