Monday, 4 March 2013

Usurai

Temptingly shiny
Playground for sliding
Thin ice

Thin ice
I walk on every day
Hoping it holds

Hoping it holds
As I sculpt duck necks
Temptingly shiny

Xxxxx

Inspired by and linked up at carpe diem.

8 comments:

joanne said...

how very lovely....I think we all tread lightly at times..

joanne said...

a delicate balance in the second...

Mark M. Redfearn said...

The shiny things that tempt us may not always be safe...

Thin Rind of Ice

WabiSabi said...

I remember loving to crack the thin ice on all the puddles! So gratifying!

jrbhaiku said...

We just can't avoid that thin ice can we.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

"Hoping it holds"

Why do we put ourselves in danger?

Thin Ice

Brudberg said...

Yes that first one is excellent wordplay. Very good

moondustwriter said...

I like the way the end completes the beginning - very nice
I'm sure the ducks are tempted to explore even if they slip