Dinosaur cloud
Floating across the blue spring sky
Dinosaur cloud
Searching for shoots to munch aloud
In the quest it's reaching up high
Then crouches down to much and lie
Dinosaur cloud
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This is a Rondelet poem, linked up at real toads where we were challenged to write one today.
12 comments:
Should it have read "to munch" ? I see that hungry, searching dinosaur in the photo!
how fun! i just love this, and isn't it great that you were able to capture that cloud. i hope your kids helped you with writing this one.
Amazing what you can see in the clouds. Thanks for sharing.
This is fun. Just right for the form. Aren't clouds just amazing with their changing shapes. Great idea.
Nicely done--and a great imagination to see a dinosaur in that cloud.
I'm with Margaret on the 'munch' word... :) Fund poem.
Pretty good poem!
We share a fascination for seeing images in cloud formations ... nice!!
wonderful words and imagery!!
I have fond memories of interpreting cloud forms with my kids. Thanks for touching that memory.
This is super, Emma. My brother and I spent hours finding animals in the clouds.
I have the same concern as Margaret, however, re "much" might want changing to "munch" in the fourth line.
K
thanksfor all your lovely comments.
I'm confused though, the fourth line does say munch, is there a dinosaur eating n on your screens?
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