Thursday, 11 April 2013

Heaven's light #NaPoWriMoDayEleven

We bask in the light
As we are raised upward
Grief we leave behind

We bask in the light
Removing all darkness
Embracing our soul

As we are raised upward
Our fears all fall away
Hope replaces all

Grief we leave behind
For those in darkness still
Engulfed in love

2 comments:

Kim Nelson said...

Your choice of form and diction complement one another so nicely. Great workl

mindlovemisery said...

I agree your composition is excellent and makes the poem that much more powerful. Beautifully done!