Tuesday 19 February 2013

Taste of success

What does it taste like?
I wish I knew

                The taste of success
                Is delectable to chew

Is it sweet?
Like French patisserie?

                No, it's so much better
                More like fresh cherry

So it lingers on the tongue
Something to enjoy

                Yes, it's absolutely wonderful
                Like a child's favourite toy

I hope one day to know
The sweet taste of success

                 Keep trying and you will
                 It's about just doing your best

Xxxxxxx

Linked up at 100 word challenge for grown ups.

4 comments:

Unknown said...

Great poem!

Bo said...

This is really good!

Unknown said...

Great, I loved this!

Anonymous said...

Brilliant writing- love this!