If you could have seen
Their faces you'd know how full
Of life they were
Life they were living
Exploring and learning
From whatever came
Whatever came was
An intriguing and wonderful
Opportunity
Opportunity
To learn and share with others
The wonders of life
Wonders of life like
Love and friendship and fun
Shared together
Shared together they
Were full of charisma and life
Perfection of youth
12 comments:
Oh how sweet!
lovely....
Sweet, innocent, bliss. Enjoyed the read.
Thank you, Emma. This is tender.
The picture was a nice tip for an application. It is sooo neat watching the little ones learn. They love learning the new!
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I love your thought and words which you express about the relation and amazing picture make these lines more wonderful. I bookmark you. charisma.co.uk
Tender, sweet and charming.
Tender, sweet and charming.
I love your Haiku chain and the picture of the little ones illustrating it so naturally :)
Fine chain and celebration. Love the pic.
Love how each last line begins the next set. It really works - and what an adorable photo!
The form and flow are so pleasing as you hook each stanza to the next with repeated phrases. Very effective devices, Emma.
So sweet..uplifting. I like the repetition and the visual form.
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