Sunday, 3 February 2013

Charisma

If you could have seen
Their faces you'd know how full
Of life they were

             Life they were living
             Exploring and learning
             From whatever came

Whatever came was
An intriguing and wonderful
Opportunity

             Opportunity
             To learn and share with others
             The wonders of life

Wonders of life like
Love and friendship and fun
Shared together

              Shared together they
              Were full of charisma and life
              Perfection of youth

12 comments:

Geraldine said...

Oh how sweet!

joanne said...

lovely....

The Write Girl said...

Sweet, innocent, bliss. Enjoyed the read.

Jim said...

Thank you, Emma. This is tender.

The picture was a nice tip for an application. It is sooo neat watching the little ones learn. They love learning the new!
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Daivd Lyod said...

I love your thought and words which you express about the relation and amazing picture make these lines more wonderful. I bookmark you. charisma.co.uk

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Tender, sweet and charming.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Tender, sweet and charming.

Mixi said...

I love your Haiku chain and the picture of the little ones illustrating it so naturally :)

Susan said...

Fine chain and celebration. Love the pic.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Love how each last line begins the next set. It really works - and what an adorable photo!

Kim Nelson said...

The form and flow are so pleasing as you hook each stanza to the next with repeated phrases. Very effective devices, Emma.

Susie Clevenger said...

So sweet..uplifting. I like the repetition and the visual form.