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Skin feels every touch
Responds to the love and pain
Inspired by and linked up at carpe diem
Very expressive haiku ~ well penned ~Carol of (A Creative Harbor)
I found that song haunting too! Nicely drawn haiku!
I am constantly amazed by the range of expression that people can find in 17 syllables. Sometimes, even fewer, depending on the form of Haiku. I love this piece. Thank you, so much, for bringing it to Haiku Friday.
Painful touch on skinBeaten there with switch or whipRhythm without loveJzB
A wonderful haiku. Love and pain creates it's on unique song.
Nice, there's a story here.
Welcome at Carpe Diem Emma. I am your host and I try to comment on every post I get, but rright now I am a bit behind on commenting. What a wonderfully composed haiku you have shared here with us. Very strong in it's choice of words ... that first line [...] skin feels every touch [...] I like very much.
Love this melting of feeling and sound!
music not just delivered, but lived. Very nice thank you :)
How many times can such music be delivered?Drumming haiku
Very nice haiku. Hope you continue to link up with Carpe Diem. My own haiku have evolved so much.. :-)
Delightful haiku Emma and welcome! :-)Eliz
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