Friday, 8 February 2013

Feel the music

Skin feels every touch
Responds to the love and pain
Music delivered

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Inspired by and linked up at carpe diem

12 comments:

Carol L McKenna said...

Very expressive haiku ~ well penned ~

Carol of (A Creative Harbor)

WabiSabi said...

I found that song haunting too! Nicely drawn haiku!

LceeL said...

I am constantly amazed by the range of expression that people can find in 17 syllables. Sometimes, even fewer, depending on the form of Haiku. I love this piece. Thank you, so much, for bringing it to Haiku Friday.

Jazzbumpa said...

Painful touch on skin
Beaten there with switch or whip
Rhythm without love

JzB

The Write Girl said...

A wonderful haiku. Love and pain creates it's on unique song.

haikuplatespecial said...

Nice, there's a story here.

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Welcome at Carpe Diem Emma. I am your host and I try to comment on every post I get, but rright now I am a bit behind on commenting.
What a wonderfully composed haiku you have shared here with us. Very strong in it's choice of words ... that first line [...] skin feels every touch [...] I like very much.

Gemma Wiseman said...

Love this melting of feeling and sound!

jrbhaiku said...

music not just delivered, but lived. Very nice thank you :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

How many times can such music be delivered?

Drumming haiku

Brudberg said...

Very nice haiku. Hope you continue to link up with Carpe Diem. My own haiku have evolved so much.. :-)

eof777 said...

Delightful haiku Emma and welcome! :-)
Eliz