Looks as sharp as ice
Comments just as cutting
What pointed remarks
Friendship on the slide
Brittle now with all the heat
Why did we argue?
Well it ever melt?
This freezing of our friendship?
I'm waiting for spring
Xxxxx
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5 comments:
Nice comparison!
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Very sad to experience iciness within a relationship with someone thought of as a friend, isn't it? Well expressed.
sharp, bitter, surprisingly quick freeze . . . but it may thaw!
very, and I never understand why people can't just talk and work things out
let's pray that all those in painful relationships can thaw their freezes
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