Friday, 1 February 2013


Looks as sharp as ice
Comments just as cutting
What pointed remarks

Friendship on the slide
Brittle now with all the heat
Why did we argue?

Well it ever melt?
This freezing of our friendship?
I'm waiting for spring


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McGuffy Ann said...

Nice comparison!
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Mary said...

Very sad to experience iciness within a relationship with someone thought of as a friend, isn't it? Well expressed.

Susan said...

sharp, bitter, surprisingly quick freeze . . . but it may thaw!

Emma Major said...

very, and I never understand why people can't just talk and work things out

Emma Major said...

let's pray that all those in painful relationships can thaw their freezes