Thursday, 31 January 2013

Do you see it?

Do you see it?
Do you?
Look
It's, it's, it's a mouse!

Catch it now
Catch it
Come on
Don't let it get away!

It's so exciting
So exciting
Look
It wants me to chase it!

I've got it
Look
Cool
I've got the mouse!

It's not playing
Come on mouse
What's wrong?
Don't you want to play?

It's stopped playing
I'm bored
Oh well
Bye bye mouse

Do you see it?
Do you?
Look
It's, it's, it's a mouse!

Xxxxxx

Linked up at poetry jam.

13 comments:

Brian Miller said...

hahaha true....the manicness of a cat once its found something interesting...lol...i like...nicely done emma

Mary said...

What fun to play with a cat, isn't it? Your poem has captured the cat's enthusiasm for playing with what it thinks is a real mouse! Nice.

SaraV said...

Emma, what a fun poem!! Purrfect :-)

Helen said...

I just knew there had to be a cat lurking about ... this was fun!

Margaret said...

..they CAN turn into a beast at the slightest proding, can't they? :)

Peggy said...

You have indeed captured the personality of a playful cat. I can just see a cat watching, pouncing and thinking these things!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Our cat brings them inside and deposits them on the rug when she gets bored with them. Yikes! I could picture this kitty clearly....a fun read!

Judy Roney said...

Oh, my gosh. What a fun poem to read. I could feel kitty's excitment and then disappointment. I can see this happening through you words so clearly.

Loredana Donovan said...

Fun! Cats love playing with those toys. My poem is about a cat, too :)

Fireblossom said...

it is! it is!

this made me smile.

Dave King said...

Yeah, that's their trouble, I guess - a mind of their own.

Robyn Greenhouse said...

very cute - and that from a dog person!

my heart's love songs said...

i think you captured the cat purrr-fectly!