Quiet, yet not dark
A feeling of complete joy
This can't be the end.
Xxx
This is my first attempt at a haiku; a Japanese three line, 17 syllable poem in the form:
5
7
5
It's linked at haiku heights for the prompt "death".
Quiet, yet not dark
A feeling of complete joy
This can't be the end.
Xxx
This is my first attempt at a haiku; a Japanese three line, 17 syllable poem in the form:
5
7
5
It's linked at haiku heights for the prompt "death".
19 comments:
A nice beginning. They're addictive.
Excellent haiku!
great haiku...aren't they a fun challenge? you're off to a wonderful start/..
great first attempt, are you sure you've not been practising.
I like the way it's the opposite of what death could make you think, well done
Watta way to go! (and with a first haiku too)
wow x pretty impressive for a first attempt! You have a talent there x
Indeed beautiful, a death I could hope for someday.
You did a lovely job. Keep it up! ;-)
Eliz
I believe I left you a comment already... Hmm.
Eliz
you did, thanks Eliz, they just wait for me to approve them (I was getting hundreds of spam each day). thanks so much for visiting
thanks Susan, me too
let's hope it wasn't luck
thanks Judith
thanks, I'm always looking to turn peoples fears.on their head
I promise :)
really really fun and I fear addictive, thanks Joanne
that means a lot coming from you mama, thanks
I fear so, thanks Anthony
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