Sunday, 13 January 2013

Is it the end?

Quiet, yet not dark
A feeling of complete joy
This can't be the end.

Xxx
This is my first attempt at a haiku; a Japanese three line, 17 syllable poem in the form:
5
7
5

It's linked at haiku heights for the prompt "death".

19 comments:

anthonynorth said...

A nice beginning. They're addictive.

Mama Zen said...

Excellent haiku!

joanne said...

great haiku...aren't they a fun challenge? you're off to a wonderful start/..

Anonymous said...

great first attempt, are you sure you've not been practising.

Anonymous said...

I like the way it's the opposite of what death could make you think, well done

Judith Westerfield said...

Watta way to go! (and with a first haiku too)

heavenhappens said...

wow x pretty impressive for a first attempt! You have a talent there x

Susan said...

Indeed beautiful, a death I could hope for someday.

eof777 said...

You did a lovely job. Keep it up! ;-)
Eliz

eof777 said...

I believe I left you a comment already... Hmm.
Eliz

Emma Major said...

you did, thanks Eliz, they just wait for me to approve them (I was getting hundreds of spam each day). thanks so much for visiting

Emma Major said...

thanks Susan, me too

Emma Major said...

let's hope it wasn't luck

Emma Major said...

thanks Judith

Emma Major said...

thanks, I'm always looking to turn peoples fears.on their head

Emma Major said...

I promise :)

Emma Major said...

really really fun and I fear addictive, thanks Joanne

Emma Major said...

that means a lot coming from you mama, thanks

Emma Major said...

I fear so, thanks Anthony