Sunday 13 January 2013

Is it the end?

Quiet, yet not dark
A feeling of complete joy
This can't be the end.

Xxx
This is my first attempt at a haiku; a Japanese three line, 17 syllable poem in the form:
5
7
5

It's linked at haiku heights for the prompt "death".

19 comments:

anthonynorth said...

A nice beginning. They're addictive.

Maude Lynn said...

Excellent haiku!

joanne said...

great haiku...aren't they a fun challenge? you're off to a wonderful start/..

Anonymous said...

great first attempt, are you sure you've not been practising.

Anonymous said...

I like the way it's the opposite of what death could make you think, well done

Judith Westerfield said...

Watta way to go! (and with a first haiku too)

Anonymous said...

wow x pretty impressive for a first attempt! You have a talent there x

Susan said...

Indeed beautiful, a death I could hope for someday.

Eliz Frank said...

You did a lovely job. Keep it up! ;-)
Eliz

Eliz Frank said...

I believe I left you a comment already... Hmm.
Eliz

LLM Calling said...

you did, thanks Eliz, they just wait for me to approve them (I was getting hundreds of spam each day). thanks so much for visiting

LLM Calling said...

thanks Susan, me too

LLM Calling said...

let's hope it wasn't luck

LLM Calling said...

thanks Judith

LLM Calling said...

thanks, I'm always looking to turn peoples fears.on their head

LLM Calling said...

I promise :)

LLM Calling said...

really really fun and I fear addictive, thanks Joanne

LLM Calling said...

that means a lot coming from you mama, thanks

LLM Calling said...

I fear so, thanks Anthony