Running up the curtains
Up and down the floors
I can hear a kitten
Bounding on his paws
Making special music on
The notes from the piano
Jumping headlong everywhere
Then stopping from full flow
Pouncing on my slippers
Biting on my toes
I'm wondering what he's up to
Only the kitten knows
Xxxx
Written for the 100 word challenge for grown ups with the prompt
…the notes from the piano…
7 comments:
brilliant
and the photo - fantastic
kittensare wonderful musicians!!! meow, piano, scratch and allll!!!
thanks
wonderful if cheeky
Cute picture and very cute poem.
Ahh, how adorable. I love it. I had only one small suggestion that you might consider. The rhythm in the very last sentence is slightly off I think.
Could one say "but only kitten knows" instead? Treat it only as slight change. The poem is brilliant and the picture adorable.
Lovely poem and cute picture!
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